my poem/s(please write a comment)

Another day
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Today is another day
I wake up to fine that the sun is shining
The birds start to sing and childeren come out to play
But inside i feel lucky but some how i feel empty inside
Maybe its that i miss my friends or mabye i miss my family
Who are in hevan,either way its another day to run outside and play to breathe eat and feel my surroundings i like that feeling But when i pass to the otherside there will not only be another day ahead it will be a whole new beiging but until then its another day to live so when i pass to the otherside don't feel bad feel happy for me because you are living another day and im doing the same on the other side its just another day...
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